Comments for Dance Lessons Blog http://dancelessonsblog.com World Wide Dance Lessons Thu, 11 Mar 2010 16:02:53 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 Comment on What kind of dance lessons are good to teach babies and toddlers? by Artemis http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lessons/what-kind-of-dance-lessons-are-good-to-teach-babies-and-toddlers#comment-8134 Artemis Tue, 02 Mar 2010 03:17:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lessons/what-kind-of-dance-lessons-are-good-to-teach-babies-and-toddlers#comment-8134 Don't expect amazing things from 3-5 year olds. Here's RADs pre-primary syllabus: Running in a circle Running en diagonale Walking with stretched feet Walking on demi-pointe Skips Demi-plies Rises Points Knee bends Jumps Bounces Claps Marches Pony steps Pony trots Pony galops Here's the primary: Swaying Step close step point Knee lifts Stork walks Sautes Echappes sautes Spring points Galops sideways Jumps with eye focus Skip change of step Here's grade 1: Battlements tendus Petit jetes Bivided battlements tensud Transfer of weight Classical walks Swaying Spinning Soubresauts Galops forward Step forward (heel toe) Picked up runs For babies, focus on rhythm and movement. Clapping in time, counting to 4, bouncing in time, 'free dance' to music, happy feet and sad feet (pointed and flexed), pretending to be animals /ghosts /trees /princesses /butterflies, etc.<br><b>References : </b><br> Don’t expect amazing things from 3-5 year olds.

Here’s RADs pre-primary syllabus:
Running in a circle
Running en diagonale
Walking with stretched feet
Walking on demi-pointe
Skips
Demi-plies
Rises
Points
Knee bends
Jumps
Bounces
Claps
Marches
Pony steps
Pony trots
Pony galops

Here’s the primary:
Swaying
Step close step point
Knee lifts
Stork walks
Sautes
Echappes sautes
Spring points
Galops sideways
Jumps with eye focus
Skip change of step

Here’s grade 1:
Battlements tendus
Petit jetes
Bivided battlements tensud
Transfer of weight
Classical walks
Swaying
Spinning
Soubresauts
Galops forward
Step forward (heel toe)
Picked up runs

For babies, focus on rhythm and movement. Clapping in time, counting to 4, bouncing in time, ‘free dance’ to music, happy feet and sad feet (pointed and flexed), pretending to be animals /ghosts /trees /princesses /butterflies, etc.
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]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by stepcool8 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8133 stepcool8 Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:23:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8133 i love traveling and so far, I have seen a lot of interesting places such as Kenya, Honk Kong, Maldive, Germany, and Iceland. Last summer I went on holiday in England and I went there with my two friends, Sonia and Paola. We stayed there for 2 weeks and we took a flight from Bari to London to get there. For the duration of the two weeks, we stayed in a college in Richmond, which is a district of London. The college was called "Digby Stuart College" and it is 20 minutes from the center of London. In London I saw a lot of famous places like the Trafalgar Square, the British Museum, the Buckingham Palace, and Big Ben. I also saw the Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important squares in London. I bought a bottle of mineral water from a bar there and I spent 15 euros for it, so the prices are very high... Then, I saw Madame Toussaud! It was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people like actors, actresses, sports figures. I even saw JJohnny Depp, Beckam, Brad Pitt! I like him a lot, in my opinion he’s wonderful, and he’s a fantastic actor.. I also saw Mourighno. I hate him. He’s a football coach and he work with inter, an Italian club.. I don’t like inter, because I am a supporter of Juventus. I don’t like him because he’s serious and disagreeable. The places I liked most were Brighton, Oxford, and London eye. Brighton is a city near London, full of shops, and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches. I also had a bath there and it was great. London eye is very fabulous, and there are many breathtaking views there. Oxford is famous for its college. In fact there are a lot of them. One of the most popular colleges is the Harry Potter’s college and thought it was beautiful and old. Oxford is full of souvenirs shops and I bought a lot of souvenirs for all my friends. English food is terrible and even at my college the meal was horrible. I always ate chips, bread and butter, I also ate a lot of chocolate and sweeties One of the best meal that I tried was fish and chips, a very traditional taka away. I often went to McDonalds. I love it even though I know is very unhealthy, but it is too tasty! Shopping in London in fantastic. I visited all the famous streets like regent’s street and oxford st. On those streets, there are lot of shops and most of them are famous brands, In my opinion, the best department store in the world is Harrods! It is indescribable. There were hundred and hundred brands inside the 5 story tall, wide building. When I went there with some friends, we got lost! So, I love London because is a lovely interesting city. I would like to back there someday.<br><b>References : </b><br>I cleaned it up a bit. it should be a lot smoother. Have someone else double check it. hope that helps. i love traveling and so far, I have seen a lot of interesting places such as Kenya, Honk Kong, Maldive, Germany, and Iceland.

Last summer I went on holiday in England and I went there with my two friends, Sonia and Paola.

We stayed there for 2 weeks and we took a flight from Bari to London to get there. For the duration of the two weeks, we stayed in a college in Richmond, which is a district of London.
The college was called "Digby Stuart College" and it is 20 minutes from the center of London.
In London I saw a lot of famous places like the Trafalgar Square, the British Museum, the Buckingham Palace, and Big Ben.
I also saw the Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important squares in London.

I bought a bottle of mineral water from a bar there and I spent 15 euros for it, so the prices are very high…
Then, I saw Madame Toussaud!

It was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people like actors, actresses, sports figures. I even saw JJohnny Depp, Beckam, Brad Pitt!
I like him a lot, in my opinion he’s wonderful, and he’s a fantastic actor..
I also saw Mourighno. I hate him. He’s a football coach and he work with inter, an Italian club..
I don’t like inter, because I am a supporter of Juventus. I don’t like him because he’s serious and disagreeable.
The places I liked most were Brighton, Oxford, and London eye.
Brighton is a city near London, full of shops, and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches. I also had a bath there and it was great. London eye is very fabulous, and there are many breathtaking views there.
Oxford is famous for its college. In fact there are a lot of them.
One of the most popular colleges is the Harry Potter’s college and thought it was beautiful and old. Oxford is full of souvenirs shops and I bought a lot of souvenirs for all my friends.
English food is terrible and even at my college the meal was horrible. I always ate chips, bread and butter, I also ate a lot of chocolate and sweeties
One of the best meal that I tried was fish and chips, a very traditional taka away.
I often went to McDonalds. I love it even though I know is very unhealthy, but it is too tasty!
Shopping in London in fantastic.
I visited all the famous streets like regent’s street and oxford st.
On those streets, there are lot of shops and
most of them are famous brands,

In my opinion, the best department store in the world is Harrods!
It is indescribable. There were hundred and hundred brands inside
the 5 story tall, wide building.
When I went there with some friends, we got lost!

So, I love London because is a lovely interesting city. I would like to back there someday.
References :
I cleaned it up a bit.

it should be a lot smoother. Have someone else double check it.
hope that helps.

]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by LyssaaxPants http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8132 LyssaaxPants Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:21:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8132 I love travelling, in fact, in my life I saw a lot of interesting places, such as Kenya, Honk Hong, Maldive, Germany, and Iceland. Last summer I went on vacation in England. I went there with two of my friends, Sonia and Paola. We stayed there for 2 weeks and took a flight from bari to London. Then, we stayed in a college in Richmond. Richmond is a district of London. The college was called Digby Stuart and it is 20 minutes from the center of London. In London, I saw a lot of famous places, like Trafalgar Square, British Museum, Buckingham Palace, and the Big Ben. Then, I saw Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important squares in London. I remembered when went to a bar and I bought a bottle of mineral water.I spend 15 euros,which was expensive. Then, I saw Madame Toussaud! It was really nice because I saw a lot of famous actresses, actors, athletes and more. I saw Jonny Depp, Beckam, Brad Pitt! I like him a lot! In my opinion, he’s wonderful, and he’s a fantastic actor. I saw Mourighno. I hate him. He’s a football coach and he works in an Italian club.. The places I liked most were Brighton, Oxford, and London eye. Brighton is a city near London, full of shops, and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches. I also had a bath there..It was great, instead London eye is fabulous, and there was a breathtaking overview. Oxford is famous fot its college. In fact there are a lot of them. One of the most populare is Harry Potter’s college. It is beautiful. I look it very old. Oxford is full of souvenirs shops in fact I bought a lot of them for all my friends. English food is terrible, in my college the meal was horrible. I always eat chips, bread and butter, I also eat a lot of chocolate and sweeties One of the best meal that I tried was fish and chips, a very traditional taka away. I often went to McDonald. I love it! I know is very unhealthy but it is too tasty! Shopping in London in fantastic. I visited all the famous street like regent’s street, oxford st….. and there are s lot of shops, most of them are famous brands. But the best department store in the world is Harrods! It is indescribable. There are hundred and hundred brands. There are 5 floors and it is very wide. In fact when I went there with some friends we get lost! So, I love London because is a lovely city, it is interesting so, I would like to come back there.<br><b>References : </b><br> I love travelling, in fact, in my life I saw a lot of interesting places, such as Kenya, Honk Hong, Maldive, Germany, and Iceland.
Last summer I went on vacation in England. I went there with two of my friends, Sonia and Paola.
We stayed there for 2 weeks and took a flight from bari to London. Then, we stayed in a college in Richmond.
Richmond is a district of London. The college was called Digby Stuart and it is 20 minutes from the center of London.
In London, I saw a lot of famous places, like Trafalgar Square, British Museum, Buckingham Palace, and the Big Ben. Then, I saw Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important squares in London. I remembered when went to a bar and I bought a bottle of mineral water.I spend 15 euros,which was expensive.
Then, I saw Madame Toussaud! It was really nice because I saw a lot of famous actresses, actors, athletes and more. I saw Jonny Depp, Beckam, Brad Pitt! I like him a lot! In my opinion, he’s wonderful, and he’s a fantastic actor.
I saw Mourighno. I hate him. He’s a football coach and he works in an Italian club..
The places I liked most were Brighton, Oxford, and London eye.
Brighton is a city near London, full of shops, and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches. I also had a bath there..It was great, instead London eye is fabulous, and there was a breathtaking overview.
Oxford is famous fot its college. In fact there are a lot of them.
One of the most populare is Harry Potter’s college. It is beautiful. I look it very old. Oxford is full of souvenirs shops in fact I bought a lot of them for all my friends.
English food is terrible, in my college the meal was horrible. I always eat chips, bread and butter, I also eat a lot of chocolate and sweeties
One of the best meal that I tried was fish and chips, a very traditional taka away.
I often went to McDonald. I love it! I know is very unhealthy but it is too tasty!
Shopping in London in fantastic.
I visited all the famous street like regent’s street, oxford st….. and there are s lot of shops, most of them are famous brands.
But the best department store in the world is Harrods!
It is indescribable. There are hundred and hundred brands.
There are 5 floors and it is very wide.
In fact when I went there with some friends we get lost!
So, I love London because is a lovely city, it is interesting so, I would like to come back there.
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]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by buildypuss http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8131 buildypuss Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:19:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8131 I love travelling, In the past I have travelled a lot and seen many very interesting places which include Kenya, Hong Kong, The Maldives, Germany and Iceland. Last year I visited England with two of my friends Sonia and Paola. We stayed there for two weeks, we took a flight fron Bari to London. We stayed at a college called Digby Stuart in Richmond. This was only twenty minutes from the centre of London. Whilst there we visited many famouse places for example Trafalgar Square, The British Museum, Buckingham Palace, Big Ben and the famouse Piccadilly Circus. I can remember going to a bar and buying a mineral water and it cost 15 euros, so quite expensive. We then went to Madam Toussauds which was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people for instance I saw Johnny Depp, Beckham, Brad Pitt who I like a lot who in my opinion is great and a fantastic actor. Hope this helps had enough now x<br><b>References : </b><br> I love travelling, In the past I have travelled a lot and seen many very interesting places which include Kenya, Hong Kong, The Maldives, Germany and Iceland. Last year I visited England with two of my friends Sonia and Paola.
We stayed there for two weeks, we took a flight fron Bari to London. We stayed at a college called Digby Stuart in Richmond. This was only twenty minutes from the centre of London. Whilst there we visited many famouse places for example Trafalgar Square, The British Museum, Buckingham Palace, Big Ben and the famouse Piccadilly Circus. I can remember going to a bar and buying a mineral water and it cost 15 euros, so quite expensive. We then went to Madam Toussauds which was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people for instance I saw Johnny Depp, Beckham, Brad Pitt who I like a lot who in my opinion is great and a fantastic actor.

Hope this helps had enough now x
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]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by ixchell-street class http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8130 ixchell-street class Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:17:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8130 I love travelling; in fact in my life I saw a lot of interesting places such as Kenya, Honk Hong, Maldive, Germany and Iceland. Last summer, I went on holiday to England. I went there with two friends: Sonia and Paola. We stayed there for two weeks and took a flight from Bari to London. We stayed in a college in Richmond (a district in London). The college was called Digby Stuart and it is 20 minutes from the center of London. In London I saw a lot of famous places such as Trafalgar Square, The British Museum, Buckingham Palace and the Big Ben. I also saw Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important squares in London. I remember when I going to a bar and I buying a bottle of mineral water for 15 Euros! It was very expensive. I also saw Madame Tussauds, it was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people like sportsman and actors and actresses such as: Jonny Depp, David Beckam, Brad Pitt! I like him a lot. In my opinion he’s wonderful and a fantastic actor. I have seen Mourighno and I dislike him. He is a football coach who works with Inter, an Italian club. I do not like Inter because I am a supporter of Juventus. I don’t like him because he’s serious and disagreeable. The places I liked most were Brighton, Oxford and London eye. Brighton is a city near London, full of shops and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches. I also had a bath there. It was great! The London eye is also fabulous, and there was a breathtaking overview. ????/Oxford is famous fot its college. In fact there are a lot of them. One of the most populare is Harry Potter’s college.???? It is beautiful. It looks very old. Oxford is full of souvenirs shops. In fact I bought a lot of souvenirs for all my friends. English food is terrible! In my college, the meal was horrible. I always ate chips, bread and butter as well as a lot of chocolate and sweets. One of the best meals that I tried was fish and chips, a very traditional taka away. I often went to McDonald. I love it! I know is very unhealthy but it is tasty! Shopping in London is fantastic. I visited all the famous streets such as Regent’s street, Oxford Street. There are a lot of shops, most of them are famous brands but the best department store in the world is Harrods! It is indescribable. There are hundred and hundreds of brands. There are five floors and it is very big. In fact when I went there with some friends we get lost! So, I love London because is a lovely city. It is interesting and I would like to come visit it again.<br><b>References : </b><br> I love travelling; in fact in my life I saw a lot of interesting places such as Kenya, Honk Hong, Maldive, Germany and Iceland.

Last summer, I went on holiday to England. I went there with two friends: Sonia and Paola. We stayed there for two weeks and took a flight from Bari to London. We stayed in a college in Richmond (a district in London). The college was called Digby Stuart and it is 20 minutes from the center of London.

In London I saw a lot of famous places such as Trafalgar Square, The British Museum, Buckingham Palace and the Big Ben. I also saw Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important squares in London. I remember when I going to a bar and I buying a bottle of mineral water for 15 Euros! It was very expensive. I also saw Madame Tussauds, it was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people like sportsman and actors and actresses such as: Jonny Depp, David Beckam, Brad Pitt! I like him a lot. In my opinion he’s wonderful and a fantastic actor.

I have seen Mourighno and I dislike him. He is a football coach who works with Inter, an Italian club. I do not like Inter because I am a supporter of Juventus. I don’t like him because he’s serious and disagreeable.

The places I liked most were Brighton, Oxford and London eye. Brighton is a city near London, full of shops and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches. I also had a bath there. It was great! The London eye is also fabulous, and there was a breathtaking overview.

????/Oxford is famous fot its college. In fact there are a lot of them.
One of the most populare is Harry Potter’s college.????

It is beautiful. It looks very old. Oxford is full of souvenirs shops. In fact I bought a lot of souvenirs for all my friends.

English food is terrible! In my college, the meal was horrible. I always ate chips, bread and butter as well as a lot of chocolate and sweets. One of the best meals that I tried was fish and chips, a very traditional taka away. I often went to McDonald. I love it! I know is very unhealthy but it is tasty!

Shopping in London is fantastic. I visited all the famous streets such as Regent’s street, Oxford Street. There are a lot of shops, most of them are famous brands but the best department store in the world is Harrods! It is indescribable. There are hundred and hundreds of brands. There are five floors and it is very big. In fact when I went there with some friends we get lost!
So, I love London because is a lovely city. It is interesting and I would like to come visit it again.
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]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by Jane S http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8129 Jane S Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:15:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8129 To begin with, traveling only has one l. Anyone who missed that (since the spell checker built into this site tells you that, i\sn't worth paying attention to.<br><b>References : </b><br> To begin with, traveling only has one l. Anyone who missed that (since the spell checker built into this site tells you that, i\sn’t worth paying attention to.
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]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by ljpeterson1956 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8128 ljpeterson1956 Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:13:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8128 I love travelling, in fact, in my life I saw a lot of interesting places such as Kenya, Honk Hong, Maldive, Germany and Iceland. Last summer I went on holiday in England. I went there with two friends, Sonia and Paola. We stayed there for 2 weeks, then took a flight from Bari to London. We actually stayed in a college in Richmond. Richmond is a district of London. The college was called Digby Stuart and it is 20 minutes from the center of London. In London I saw a lot of famous places like Trafalgar Square, British Museum, Buckingham Palace and the Big Ben. Than I saw Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important squares in London. I remember when I went to a bar and I bought a bottle of mineral water and I spent 15 euros, so the prices are very high... Then I saw Madame Toussaud. It was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people like actors, actresses and sportsman. I saw Jonny Depp, Beckam and Brad Pitt! I like him a lot. In my opinion he’s wonderful, and he’s a fantastic actor.. I have seen Mourighno. I hate him. He’s a football coach and he works with inter, an Italian club.. I don’t like inter, because I am a supporter of Juventus. I don’t like him because he’s serious and disagreable. The places I liked most were Brighton, Oxford and London eye.. Brighton is a city near London, full of shops, and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches. I also had a bath there.. it was great. Instead London eye is fabulous, and there was a breathtaking overview. Oxford is famous for its college. In fact, there are a lot of them. One of the most popular is Harry Potter’s college. It is beautiful. It looks very old. Oxford is full of souvenier shops. In fact, I bought a lot of them for all my friends. English food is terrible. In my college, the meal was horrible. I always eat chips, bread and butter, I also eat a lot of chocolate and sweets. One of the best meals that I tried was fish and chips...a very traditional take-a-way. I often went to McDonalds. I love it! I know is very unhealthy but it is too tasty! Shopping in London in fantastic. I visited all the famous streets like Regent’s Street, Oxford St….. and there are lots of shops. Most of them are famous brands. But the best department store in the world is Harrods! It is indescribable. There are hundreds and hundreds of brands. There are 5 floors and it is very wide. In fact, when I went there with some friends we get lost! So, I love London because is a lovely city. It is so interesting. I would like to come back there.<br><b>References : </b><br>English I love travelling, in fact, in my life I saw a lot of interesting places such as Kenya, Honk Hong, Maldive, Germany and Iceland.

Last summer I went on holiday in England. I went there with two friends, Sonia and Paola.
We stayed there for 2 weeks, then took a flight from Bari to London. We actually stayed in a college in Richmond.
Richmond is a district of London. The college was called Digby Stuart and it is 20 minutes from the center of London.
In London I saw a lot of famous places like Trafalgar Square, British Museum, Buckingham Palace and the Big Ben. Than I saw Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important squares in London. I remember when I went to a bar and I bought a bottle of mineral water and I spent 15 euros, so the prices are very high…
Then I saw Madame Toussaud. It was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people like actors, actresses and sportsman. I saw Jonny Depp, Beckam and Brad Pitt! I like him a lot. In my opinion he’s wonderful, and he’s a fantastic actor..
I have seen Mourighno. I hate him. He’s a football coach and he works with inter, an Italian club..
I don’t like inter, because I am a supporter of Juventus. I don’t like him because he’s serious and disagreable.
The places I liked most were Brighton, Oxford and London eye..
Brighton is a city near London, full of shops, and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches. I also had a bath there.. it was great. Instead London eye is fabulous, and there was a breathtaking overview.
Oxford is famous for its college. In fact, there are a lot of them.
One of the most popular is Harry Potter’s college. It is beautiful. It looks very old. Oxford is full of souvenier shops. In fact, I bought a lot of them for all my friends.
English food is terrible. In my college, the meal was horrible. I always eat chips, bread and butter, I also eat a lot of chocolate and sweets.
One of the best meals that I tried was fish and chips…a very traditional take-a-way.
I often went to McDonalds. I love it! I know is very unhealthy but it is too tasty!
Shopping in London in fantastic.
I visited all the famous streets like Regent’s Street, Oxford St….. and there are lots of shops. Most of them are famous brands.
But the best department store in the world is Harrods!
It is indescribable. There are hundreds and hundreds of brands.
There are 5 floors and it is very wide.
In fact, when I went there with some friends we get lost!
So, I love London because is a lovely city. It is so interesting. I would like to come back there.
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]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by SO CRAZY!! http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8127 SO CRAZY!! Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:11:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8127 As much as people want to help you really if you then get it perfect,it isn't fair is it? If you make mistakes your teacher will correct you and tell you where you went wrong. Otherwise she will think you are more advanced than you really are. Don't get into the habit of cheating - not worth itin the long run. By the way, considering you are Italian, and English is not your first languageI think your attempt is very good!<br><b>References : </b><br> As much as people want to help you really if you then get it perfect,it isn’t fair is it? If you make mistakes your teacher will correct you and tell you where you went wrong. Otherwise she will think you are more advanced than you really are. Don’t get into the habit of cheating - not worth itin the long run. By the way, considering you are Italian, and English is not your first languageI think your attempt is very good!
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]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by kattastrofee http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8126 kattastrofee Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:09:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8126 do your own homework, if you cant write in proper english, thats something you need to learn. dont cheat.<br><b>References : </b><br> do your own homework, if you cant write in proper english, thats something you need to learn. dont cheat.
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]]> Comment on An Overview of The City of London by Sweet Pea http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8125 Sweet Pea Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:07:59 +0000 http://dancelessonsblog.com/dance-lesson/an-overview-of-the-city-of-london-7#comment-8125 there is a lot of mis-spellings and bad sentences. Here is a little help..i corrected some mis-spellings and changes some words a bit. I love traveling, in fact in my life I saw a lot of interesting places such as Kenya, Honk Hong, Maldive, Germany, Iceland. Last summer I went on a vacation to England. I went there with two friends, Sonia and Paola. We stayed there for 2 weeks, we took a flight from Bari to London. We stayed in a college in Richmond. Richmond is a district of London. The college was called Digby Stuart and it is 20 minutes from the center of London. In London I saw a lot of famous places like Trafalgar Square, British Museum, Buckingham Palace, the Big Ben. Then I saw Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important square in London. I went to a bar and I bought a bottle of mineral water and I spent 15 Euros, the prices are very high... Then I saw Madame Toussaud, it was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people like actors, actress, and sportsman.. I saw Jonny Depp, Beckam, Bread Pitt! I like him a lot, in my opinion he’s wonderful, and he’s a fantastic actor.. I have seen Mourighno. I dislike him. He’s a football coach and he works with Inter, an Italian club.. I don’t like Inter because I am a supporter of Juventus. I don’t like him because he’s serious and disagreeable. The places I liked most were Brighton Oxford London eye.. Brighton is a city near London, full of shops, and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches., I also had a bath there.. it was great. London eye is fabulous, and there was a breathtaking overview. Oxford is famous for its college. In fact there are a lot of them. One of the most popular is Harry Potter’s college. It is beautiful. It look it very old. Oxford is full of souvenir shops. In fact I bought a lot of them for all my friends. English food is terrible, in my college the meal was horrible. I always eat chips, bread and butter, I also eat a lot of chocolate and sweets. One of the best meals that I tried was fish and chips, a very traditional take away. I often went to McDonalds. I love it! I know is very unhealthy but it is too tasty! Shopping in London is fantastic. I visited all the famous street like regent’s street, oxford St., and there are s lot of shops, most of them are famous brands. But the best department store in the world is Harrods! It is indescribable. There are hundreds and hundreds of brands. There are 5 floors and it is very wide. In fact when I went there with some friends we get lost! So, I love London because is a lovely city, it is interesting, I would like to come back there.<br><b>References : </b><br> there is a lot of mis-spellings and bad sentences. Here is a little help..i corrected some mis-spellings and changes some words a bit.

I love traveling, in fact in my life I saw a lot of interesting places such as Kenya, Honk Hong, Maldive, Germany, Iceland.
Last summer I went on a vacation to England. I went there with two friends, Sonia and Paola.
We stayed there for 2 weeks, we took a flight from Bari to London. We stayed in a college in Richmond.
Richmond is a district of London. The college was called Digby Stuart and it is 20 minutes from the center of London.
In London I saw a lot of famous places like Trafalgar Square, British Museum, Buckingham Palace, the Big Ben. Then I saw Piccadilly Circus, one of the most important square in London. I went to a bar and I bought a bottle of mineral water and I spent 15 Euros, the prices are very high…
Then I saw Madame Toussaud, it was really nice because I saw a lot of famous people like actors, actress, and sportsman.. I saw Jonny Depp, Beckam, Bread Pitt! I like him a lot, in my opinion he’s wonderful, and he’s a fantastic actor..
I have seen Mourighno. I dislike him. He’s a football coach and he works with Inter, an Italian club..
I don’t like Inter because I am a supporter of Juventus. I don’t like him because he’s serious and disagreeable.
The places I liked most were Brighton Oxford London eye..
Brighton is a city near London, full of shops, and it is famous because there are beautiful sandy beaches., I also had a bath there.. it was great. London eye is fabulous, and there was a breathtaking overview.
Oxford is famous for its college. In fact there are a lot of them.
One of the most popular is Harry Potter’s college. It is beautiful. It look it very old. Oxford is full of souvenir shops. In fact I bought a lot of them for all my friends.
English food is terrible, in my college the meal was horrible. I always eat chips, bread and butter, I also eat a lot of chocolate and sweets.
One of the best meals that I tried was fish and chips, a very traditional take away.
I often went to McDonalds. I love it! I know is very unhealthy but it is too tasty!
Shopping in London is fantastic.
I visited all the famous street like regent’s street, oxford St., and there are s lot of shops, most of them are famous brands.
But the best department store in the world is Harrods!
It is indescribable. There are hundreds and hundreds of brands.
There are 5 floors and it is very wide.
In fact when I went there with some friends we get lost!
So, I love London because is a lovely city, it is interesting, I would like to come back there.
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